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 '''Initially established'''
-When Andrea_Doria_ first entered EMC, he had no fixed place and wandered around. By chance, he joined the Xia Empire and settled in Hangzhou, the capital of Xia. After settled down, Andrea_Doria_ needed Golds upgrades his equipment, and he had no choice but mining and Vote. By chance, he remembered Changsha, where he had been to the store where Ice Railway passed through. He also wanted to build the same store to make money. Then, With the help of Emperor Xia II, the Suiyuan Supply Station was established at the junction of the Ice Railway in north-central China
+When Andrea_Doria_ first entered EMC, he had no fixed place and wandered around. By chance, he joined the Xia Empire and settled in Hangzhou, the capital of Xia. After settled down, Andrea_Doria_ needed Golds upgrades his equipment, and he had no choice but mining and Vote. One day he remembered Changsha, where he had been to the store where Ice Railway passed through. He also wanted to build the same store to make money. Then, With the help of Emperor Xia II, the Suiyuan Supply Station was established at the junction of the Ice Railway in north-central China
 '''Empire Era'''