Svalbard (2019-21): Difference between revisions

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 === '''New Randers Rebellion''' ===
 ==== Beginning ====
-A player by the name of RG_Guy_05, with gnomedrick, decide that they wanted to rebel against their nation of Svalbard, because they weren't creating a democracy. And [[New Randers]] was born. circa. December 2019.
+A player by the name of RG_Guy_05, with gnomedrick, decided that they wanted to rebel against their nation of Svalbard because of the refusal to start as a democracy. Therefore, [[New Randers]] was born. circa. December 2019.
 ==== Failure ====
 The town at first joined Svalbard, trying to fool Thundorlord. But a few hours later left, and started the rebellion.
-Since they were very poor, a nation couldn't be achieved. Eventually Rg guy went inactive, leaving gnomedrick as the mayor. The town got a few people, but eventually went inactive. The town will fall sometime in late March 2020.
+Due to their lack of gold, they couldn't reach nationhood. Eventually RG_guy_05 went inactive, leaving gnomedrick as the mayor. The town got a few people, but eventually went completely inactive. The town will fall soon sometime in late March 2020.
 == Cities ==